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Blurred Focus
A blurred focus, through fractured
lens, is more than enough.
We still polish the glaze
lovingly.
A rising from the dust and
glass ashes is no miracle,
naught but a rebirth awaited
expectantly.
We gather the least favored
and stones grind their bones.
Molten truths harden
inevitably.
Nothing much remains
besides the stained votive
tokens, cracks abound
transparently.
Published 17th Jan 2013
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17th Jan 2013 10:24pm
Atakti,
you have a great way of drenching your poetry in imagery.
The four stanzas together make a marvelous poem , each stanza on it's own has something pretty good to say too.
hat tip to you, shine on
you have a great way of drenching your poetry in imagery.
The four stanzas together make a marvelous poem , each stanza on it's own has something pretty good to say too.
hat tip to you, shine on
17th Jan 2013 10:28pm
18th Jan 2013 00:36am
18th Jan 2013 10:29am
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18th Jan 2013 10:30am
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18th Jan 2013 1:52pm
Anonymous
18th Jan 2013 1:11pm
"We gather the least favored
and stones grind their bones.
Molten truths harden
inevitably." - I loved this part.
"Nothing much remains
besides the stained votive
tokens, cracks abound
transparently." - but I really, really loved the ending the best!!!
Excellent poeting my dear Atakti ...
and stones grind their bones.
Molten truths harden
inevitably." - I loved this part.
"Nothing much remains
besides the stained votive
tokens, cracks abound
transparently." - but I really, really loved the ending the best!!!
Excellent poeting my dear Atakti ...
18th Jan 2013 1:53pm
20th Jan 2013 6:07pm
20th Jan 2013 6:23pm
Ooh, now, don't say "perfect" to me, I'll panic, lol.
Thanks very much, Blake. :)
Thanks very much, Blake. :)