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Jack and Jill
Jack and Jill went up the hill[/font]
Jack raped Jill [/font]
He had help from bill[/font]
Jill came back [/font]
She just fell like a sack[/font]
Jack was proud [/font]
He told everyone she was loud[/font]
Jill was upset[/font]
She knew she had to kill jack but not quite yet[/font]
Jill invited jack up the hill [/font]
Jack was glad and said that he will[/font]
Jill pushed him down [/font]
So she could kick in his crown[/font]
Jack grabbed Jill as they fell down the hill[/font]
There they laid [/font]
Hidden in the shade[/font]
As time past [/font]
They were together at last [/font]
Jack raped Jill [/font]
He had help from bill[/font]
Jill came back [/font]
She just fell like a sack[/font]
Jack was proud [/font]
He told everyone she was loud[/font]
Jill was upset[/font]
She knew she had to kill jack but not quite yet[/font]
Jill invited jack up the hill [/font]
Jack was glad and said that he will[/font]
Jill pushed him down [/font]
So she could kick in his crown[/font]
Jack grabbed Jill as they fell down the hill[/font]
There they laid [/font]
Hidden in the shade[/font]
As time past [/font]
They were together at last [/font]
Published 8th Aug 2010
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9th Aug 2010 12:29pm
16th Aug 2010 6:24pm
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19th Aug 2010 1:04am
I really like this rewrite. So interesting to see what classics can be warped into. :]
24th Aug 2010 4:52am
27th Aug 2010 9:03am
Then again, I have always been a perv. :P I love how evil it is, yet your mind is like "Wah! What's happening!? This isn't right! Is it?"
20th Apr 2012 6:49pm
Is this original..or was this influenced by the short film The Hill dir. Deborah Chow?? Either way love the angle. Great write.
