My Infinite Autumn

Infinite autumn is where you'll find me,
You may find me silhouetted against the September sunset,
Infinite Autumn is where you'll find me,
You might find me crested aloft in fiery  leaves,
Infinite autumn is where you'll find me,
You might find me buried in my daydream, where you are no threat,
Infinite autumn is where you'll find me,
You might find me sleeping in my coffin while everyone grieves,
Infinite autumn is where you'll find me,
You might find me in the evening whispering with the wind
Infinite Autumn is where you'll find me,
You might find me waterpainting the sky orange and blue,
Infinite autumn is where you'll find me,
Now you can stop looking for me,  
Infinite autumn is where you'll find me,
We are just children you and I,
Infinite Autumn is where you'll find me,
Now let me rest in peace and leave me be,
Infinite autumn is where you'll find me,
Let me be buried in the soothing green sea...
 
This poem is about a grieving person looking for a dead girl who died in autumn. This girl is in her personal heaven, which is incidentally,autumn. She wants the person to get over her love with the boy and to move on. this is an amateur poem. I am just experiencing writing poetry...i want your honest opinion...thanks