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Irritating Women
You say all women irritate you
Have you looked in the mirror?
Can’t you see, it is not the women
It is in what manner you treat them
You lure them in
Then pull away when you have succumed
Denying how your scared of what you feel
Knowing when you have gotten what you needed
All women are the similar
Our hearts are filled with immense emotions
We love genuinely with our doubts
We are hormonal beings
Your empty shell, allows the cracks to remain
Blinded by your past, having no trust in women
Irritating women passed on your path with naïve prejudice
What you find irritating, others call caring
You can care for only yourself, a selfish man
No tools were shown to you to see others
You cannot accept being loved
To allow a woman into you wholeheartedly
Irritating woman beware
If spoken by a man this idiotic phrase
Walk away for he is not worth your irritation
He is not a man, He is a simpleton
A fool, with fears of being loved
Someone who deflects his insecurities
Unknowingly using women to pass by life
Treating them as passerby’s
A false man who doesn’t understand real love
A man who doesn’t allow himself to be loved
A man who doesn’t embrace and take hold
When a good woman is standing in front of him
Have you looked in the mirror?
Can’t you see, it is not the women
It is in what manner you treat them
You lure them in
Then pull away when you have succumed
Denying how your scared of what you feel
Knowing when you have gotten what you needed
All women are the similar
Our hearts are filled with immense emotions
We love genuinely with our doubts
We are hormonal beings
Your empty shell, allows the cracks to remain
Blinded by your past, having no trust in women
Irritating women passed on your path with naïve prejudice
What you find irritating, others call caring
You can care for only yourself, a selfish man
No tools were shown to you to see others
You cannot accept being loved
To allow a woman into you wholeheartedly
Irritating woman beware
If spoken by a man this idiotic phrase
Walk away for he is not worth your irritation
He is not a man, He is a simpleton
A fool, with fears of being loved
Someone who deflects his insecurities
Unknowingly using women to pass by life
Treating them as passerby’s
A false man who doesn’t understand real love
A man who doesn’t allow himself to be loved
A man who doesn’t embrace and take hold
When a good woman is standing in front of him
Published 16th Jan 2013
| Edited 18th Jan 2013
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23rd Jan 2013 9:58pm
I like this. I couldn't have said it better my self. This is what I would say but never found the right words. I see that you have a gift for expressing words. Nice Work! :-)
24th Jan 2013 4:50am
Hey SophiaRose, you've put forward an honest and sincere message and it's great to read it, very refreshing. Be sure to do the quick edits before posting, anyway, I like how relative this poem is and it's pretty easy to connect with, i've been hit and miss with relationships myself so the message here does help some. Most men aren't as bad as the one depicted here, but there is a good bunch that bring the rest of us down, while some men are selfish, others are selfless and have hearts to break.
Keep the faith Sophia, loved your poem.
Keep the faith Sophia, loved your poem.
24th Jan 2013 4:49am
thank you so much, I am learning the editing process, it is difficult at times, I know not all men are not so,yet these type navigate to me ,,lol
Stay strong, there's always a diamond in the rough with men, most of us play it off cold and disinterested.. just our M.O. You'll be right. :-)
27th Jan 2013 6:32am