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Planned Suicide
Planned Suicide
Lying on the bed
Crying for help
The only other option
Is a slow painless death
She picks up the telephone
Talking to a friend
My life is useless
It somehow must end
There’s no joy in
Her soul today
Visions of suicide in
Her head do play
When she needed someone
To just be there
They turned their backs
They just didn’t care
She went into the bathroom
And looked into the mirror
Heart broken, lonely,
Sad and teary
No one would answer her
When she calls
No, not a soul,
Not anyone at all
She held up her arms and
Said, my life is a twist
Seconds later she
Cut both her wrists.
Laying on the floor
In a puddle of blood
Crying, and sad because
No one gave her love
While slowly closing her eyes
One more time she cried;
It’s over for me now
No more hurt inside
Before she planned
This selfish act
She wrote a note
And explained the facts
The note said I’m leaving
Not that anyone care
When I needed you the most
You were never there
You can’t find my life
Because Now I am free
No one ever cared what
Happened to me
I don’t have to hear
Or put up with lies
No one made me do this
It’s a planned suicide!!!!!!!
Lying on the bed
Crying for help
The only other option
Is a slow painless death
She picks up the telephone
Talking to a friend
My life is useless
It somehow must end
There’s no joy in
Her soul today
Visions of suicide in
Her head do play
When she needed someone
To just be there
They turned their backs
They just didn’t care
She went into the bathroom
And looked into the mirror
Heart broken, lonely,
Sad and teary
No one would answer her
When she calls
No, not a soul,
Not anyone at all
She held up her arms and
Said, my life is a twist
Seconds later she
Cut both her wrists.
Laying on the floor
In a puddle of blood
Crying, and sad because
No one gave her love
While slowly closing her eyes
One more time she cried;
It’s over for me now
No more hurt inside
Before she planned
This selfish act
She wrote a note
And explained the facts
The note said I’m leaving
Not that anyone care
When I needed you the most
You were never there
You can’t find my life
Because Now I am free
No one ever cared what
Happened to me
I don’t have to hear
Or put up with lies
No one made me do this
It’s a planned suicide!!!!!!!
Published 14th Jan 2013
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15th Jan 2013 1:32am
so sad dear... but each individual has its own way of dealing with life...i hope that this wouldn't be the option to take..for life is precious and it should be well lived.. :)
29th Jan 2013 5:48am
You are right. Life is precious and should be well lived. but like you say people deal with grief differently. Thanks so much for stopping by.
18th Jan 2013 4:13am
The rhyme in this is absolutely done wonderfully. Although this is a sad topic that is usually overlooked by many-you have given facts that more people in general need to think about. Too many people die every year from suicide because they are having problems. I also agree with what Fierce said above me. :)
22nd Jan 2013 00:08am
Thank you so much. I wish that it could be stopped and someone just once could reach out and help those that plan this act and save them. It is very sad, and heart breaking to lose any life. Thanks so much for visiting me, and you are always welcome to come again.