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Tell Me The Title
Never ending tiresome journey
Obliviously trudging on through life
Bleary eyed and tired
Once smiling now weighted in strife
Daunting routines monopolise the days
Yearning for sweet escape
Caring faces are unseen
As around me circle black feathered birds
Raking claws search out my eyes
Each now blind and bloodied
See no more this unfeeling world.
Obliviously trudging on through life
Bleary eyed and tired
Once smiling now weighted in strife
Daunting routines monopolise the days
Yearning for sweet escape
Caring faces are unseen
As around me circle black feathered birds
Raking claws search out my eyes
Each now blind and bloodied
See no more this unfeeling world.
Published 7th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 11:37am
7th Jan 2013 11:48pm
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8th Jan 2013 9:38am
Thanks for your comment and glad you liked it, the title is hidden in the poem itself and once seen becomes obvious....
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 11:37am
8th Jan 2013 9:45am
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8th Jan 2013 3:33pm
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 11:37am
8th Jan 2013 6:59pm
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9th Jan 2013 2:03am
Intriguing use of an acrostic. The style is forgotten too often. The visuals to an unseeing world is beautifully orchestrated through your words.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
