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Challenges
Challenges are the
very salt of life
meant to be rubbed
into flesh.
Let them burn
the wounds they slash
for I‘d die to be on fire.
very salt of life
meant to be rubbed
into flesh.
Let them burn
the wounds they slash
for I‘d die to be on fire.
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Re: Challenges
5th Jan 2013 11:02pm
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Re: Challenges
8th Jan 2013 2:38am
hm.. I missed the philosophical aspect but I think you nailed the thrill of victory and the agony of defeat.
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re: Re: Challenges
8th Jan 2013 6:51pm
Thanks for your comment. It is interesting to see those few words interpreted that differently.
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16th Jan 2013 1:24am
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16th Jan 2013 1:10pm
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18th Mar 2013 6:23am
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re: Re: Challenges
19th Jul 2013 11:04pm
Fire is passion, too, which isn't always "clean" :-). But yes, you're perfectly right when we think about the medieval crucibles. Purifying through fire :-(.
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