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Drowning?
Gripped by fear
Alone
Standing at the edge of "what if" potential
Wondering
Pondering the sea of contradictions below
Movement /Stagnation
Expansion / Contraction
Liberation / Repression
Trust / Suspicion
Cruxifiction / Ressurrection
Life / Death
Me /You
A cross current of choices
Edging closer
I leap
freefalling
a future beckons
come follow
swim with me?!
Alone
Standing at the edge of "what if" potential
Wondering
Pondering the sea of contradictions below
Movement /Stagnation
Expansion / Contraction
Liberation / Repression
Trust / Suspicion
Cruxifiction / Ressurrection
Life / Death
Me /You
A cross current of choices
Edging closer
I leap
freefalling
a future beckons
come follow
swim with me?!
Published 29th Jul 2010
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19th Aug 2010 7:34pm
20th Aug 2010 6:12pm
Thank you Delirious, I glad in touched you, it truely represents how I feel about my life at the moment, I have jumped now I wait to see if I swim or drown!
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21st Aug 2010 11:33pm
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11th Mar 2011 6:18am
Life is a sea of mixed thoughts and opportunities we test the water to see if its ok, once in we realize we are lost. everyone needs a life vest in life. an object or person that will be there to save you when the seas get rough. who or what is your life vest?
12th Mar 2011 8:32am
Thank you for reading and your comment. Life has indeed been stormy lately, but the gift is I have realised that i can be my own life vest.