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Comburent Labefaction
Scar tissue torn apart- the abditive secrets now visible.
Achroous ashes begin to advesperate a conticent soul.
Deprehend the Demon and dilaniate its menalic mind.
Send the ashes asunder into the universe of amaranthine time.
Drain all the stolen light and happiness from its mind.
Then, return them to their lost and Dioptric owners;
And watch, as they begin to vesuviate a lachrymose of joy.
Zoë LeeaNora Holdsclaw
12/31/12
Published 3rd Jan 2013
| Edited 22nd Jan 2014
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20th Jan 2013 3:45am
O.O Wow. I read your profile and you said you tend to use big words. The same lies for me but only in my advanced style of writing. I had some fun analyzing this piece. My favorite line would have to be this one "Send the ashes asunder into the universe of amaranthine time" Genius stuff here. You're quite the interesting poet indeed. I definitely like this poem. Great work
22nd Jan 2013 4:43am
Thank-you very much. I also speak with a massive vocabulary as well, neither my teachers nor my friends know even half of what I am speaking of. The sad part is, though, I have to write down the definitions of almost every word(except for the basics)in my essays.
22nd Jan 2013 4:50am
You're welcome :) The fact that you have to write down definitions of almost every word in your essay is extremely sad. That's pretty much saying you're far more intelligent than your teacher. You gotta dumb it down for em xD I know it sucks because it happens to me often when I talk to my friends. Nothing wrong with being smart though
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