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[the mechanics]
welcome to the murder machine
put a rusty coin in
turn the key
how could we have known
bleeding hearts assimilate
sitting in a minefield
drinking whiskey
high tops reaching higher
than our hopes ever could
the sun sets like it's running
from some invisible enemy
the sniper called "love"
come to gun us down
put a rusty coin in
turn the key
how could we have known
bleeding hearts assimilate
sitting in a minefield
drinking whiskey
high tops reaching higher
than our hopes ever could
the sun sets like it's running
from some invisible enemy
the sniper called "love"
come to gun us down
Published 25th Jul 2010
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25th Jul 2010 6:47am
"The sniper called love come to gun us down" very powerful and so very, very true. Loved it !!!!! Thank you for your comments on Slingers Redemption.
25th Jul 2010 3:25pm
thank you~sometimes the mood will strike me & it feels as if all the emotions i've been trying to convey just flow into words so effortlessly...sometimes i'm able to very accurately describe a thought and when that happens i get so excited! lol
25th Jul 2010 6:34pm
I like to think when a good poem comes along its always from your mood or feelings. Art, poems, music, almost anything, always takes a part of us with it.
25th Jul 2010 8:03am
Oh I love this one more then your last poem, "high tops reaching higher
than our hopes ever could" It is lovley!
than our hopes ever could" It is lovley!