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thee world is forgetting eye'm forgetting thee world
how
inth'hell did I wind
up
forgetting thee world
thee realworld ?
everThing
seems to've
vanished, but it wasn't
one[of]them quick vanishments...it's
taken
nearly this whole century pieceByPiece
fallin
in somekinda centurian hole, like thee
hole
aye got cut into 'me' bignuff t'drive a
heart
thru, stitching me bequiverin'meatmuscle
whilst
i was fast asleep asleep asleeping wit
death
(on a par'time basis,pieceWork, paid-by-each
piece)
i, i, nor i never knew what Hit 'me' / all
them
little attacks seemed seemingly innocuous enough...
had
to wonder what the big flap was all about,
why
thee always smilin nurse-maids&nurse-men stopped
smilin
lookin like somekinda 'oShit[!]' look,lookin
like
that there was some emergent dead'line in they's
heads ----
& thee head i'thought was 'mine' is forgetting
every
thing that used-to-be 'real', [but really wasn't]
a 'home' on this earth seems [seemingly] beyond any
'me'
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inth'hell did I wind
up
forgetting thee world
thee realworld ?
everThing
seems to've
vanished, but it wasn't
one[of]them quick vanishments...it's
taken
nearly this whole century pieceByPiece
fallin
in somekinda centurian hole, like thee
hole
aye got cut into 'me' bignuff t'drive a
heart
thru, stitching me bequiverin'meatmuscle
whilst
i was fast asleep asleep asleeping wit
death
(on a par'time basis,pieceWork, paid-by-each
piece)
i, i, nor i never knew what Hit 'me' / all
them
little attacks seemed seemingly innocuous enough...
had
to wonder what the big flap was all about,
why
thee always smilin nurse-maids&nurse-men stopped
smilin
lookin like somekinda 'oShit[!]' look,lookin
like
that there was some emergent dead'line in they's
heads ----
& thee head i'thought was 'mine' is forgetting
every
thing that used-to-be 'real', [but really wasn't]
a 'home' on this earth seems [seemingly] beyond any
'me'
xxxxxdkzk2012pixtrsVoidsEtcXXXXXXXXX
Published 27th Dec 2012
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28th Dec 2012 00:09am
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28th Dec 2012 3:17am
thank Amanecio....
You Tube has got a bunch of me sax'ing (Dan Kozak), FB page too.
glad ye dig me writs...
You Tube has got a bunch of me sax'ing (Dan Kozak), FB page too.
glad ye dig me writs...
28th Dec 2012 00:52am
Wow this is a freaking great poem. I know you mean about a decade flying by everything to me is a blur or dream like memory.....then you realize holy shit that was 10 years ago.reality is a bitch when she slaps you, you feel it....
28th Dec 2012 3:29am
i'preciate yr enthusiasm for my miss'ives...
very few'round here 'get it'....thankyou mostmuch.
my 'problem' is that Reality
isn't especially real anymore...but, in a way, that, in-&-of itself,
solves the problem
it's like there's 7Billion realities in the world, mostly in some degree of conflict wit one another.
that kinda cancels the validity of any 'reality'- & kinda makes it a blood-sport of ego.
Even the winners lose.
oh,well.....g'odd bless ye, love
very few'round here 'get it'....thankyou mostmuch.
my 'problem' is that Reality
isn't especially real anymore...but, in a way, that, in-&-of itself,
solves the problem
it's like there's 7Billion realities in the world, mostly in some degree of conflict wit one another.
that kinda cancels the validity of any 'reality'- & kinda makes it a blood-sport of ego.
Even the winners lose.
oh,well.....g'odd bless ye, love