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tu b'av
tonight
is the night
of our rendezvous
neath the gibbous moon
in the midst of awestruck goblins
and sparkling cherubs floating fleeting
in the placental incandescent silverdust
in the clandestine audience of lovelorn
golems flanked by earthen pots with
snake oil and jaggery stored within
with fluorescent saplings whispering
mythical secrets to the soil
saturated with crushed
rose petals from such
nights of beauteous
trysts in the ancient
midnight garden
between us
lovers who
find a little
more of truth
impetus beauty
essence and
each other
every
single
time
.
Published 27th Dec 2012
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27th Dec 2012 6:17pm
Too much juju is always just the right amount.
For me, one in a million can make the fairy dust actually sparkle, and you my friend fly through the dazzle.
Every line feels so good to say that the intent of the words sneak past consciousness and hit their mark.
Grateful,sir wand.
Ps. Title? Whats that mean?
For me, one in a million can make the fairy dust actually sparkle, and you my friend fly through the dazzle.
Every line feels so good to say that the intent of the words sneak past consciousness and hit their mark.
Grateful,sir wand.
Ps. Title? Whats that mean?
27th Dec 2012 9:57pm
lb
haha. juju. :] i trust you. as always.
and thank you. that means a lot. believe me.
i agree with what you have said and this is
not the first time. so it's a rare compliment
and one i can hold onto.
title is a reference to a jewish date.
it's like a jewish day of love.:D i don't
know why i had that grin there.
much love my dear man.
x
sumeet
haha. juju. :] i trust you. as always.
and thank you. that means a lot. believe me.
i agree with what you have said and this is
not the first time. so it's a rare compliment
and one i can hold onto.
title is a reference to a jewish date.
it's like a jewish day of love.:D i don't
know why i had that grin there.
much love my dear man.
x
sumeet
28th Dec 2012 4:32pm
HEBREW :D
I actually can't speak very much of it. I am a bad Jew.
What a dazzling image you create. Your are incredibly attentive to detail which is something a lot of poets can not afford, for sake of poetic format and style but you have got something that sets you apart.
Stunned, per usual. Great, great job.
I actually can't speak very much of it. I am a bad Jew.
What a dazzling image you create. Your are incredibly attentive to detail which is something a lot of poets can not afford, for sake of poetic format and style but you have got something that sets you apart.
Stunned, per usual. Great, great job.
28th Dec 2012 11:43pm
sublime
ha. yes, hebrew. alright, you are a bad one.:]
thank you for stopping by. i actually wanted
some sort of confirmation on this. so your
stopping over is an indirect validation.
and for the kind words as always.
happy days.
x
sumeet
ha. yes, hebrew. alright, you are a bad one.:]
thank you for stopping by. i actually wanted
some sort of confirmation on this. so your
stopping over is an indirect validation.
and for the kind words as always.
happy days.
x
sumeet