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D i s appear'd
i coulda broken my
heartedness, but
it, (nor 'I' as
may or may not
have been),
never
left
any
one -
when heart lay
eX'posed, unbeating for
many hours, in thee hands
of strangers how could
i'd have known(that)
someone else's death would
break love's back
two quick'short years later,
& you you
you
would see no choice
but to disappear
thee way it was sworn you never would
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heartedness, but
it, (nor 'I' as
may or may not
have been),
never
left
any
one -
when heart lay
eX'posed, unbeating for
many hours, in thee hands
of strangers how could
i'd have known(that)
someone else's death would
break love's back
two quick'short years later,
& you you
you
would see no choice
but to disappear
thee way it was sworn you never would
xxxxdkzk2012xxxxxxxxxxpix'tooxxxxx
Published 20th Dec 2012
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20th Dec 2012 2:18am
What can I say except I love it this is deep on many levels.. :) your poetry book is gonna be great! Put me down for 5 copies!
20th Dec 2012 3:16am
yr a sweetheart.....
i fried myself on tryin't 'market' myself both in litter'ature & music....
thee 2yrs that this piece 'covers', put an end to any kinda substantial 'self-promotion'....
peaces,dear
dkzk
i fried myself on tryin't 'market' myself both in litter'ature & music....
thee 2yrs that this piece 'covers', put an end to any kinda substantial 'self-promotion'....
peaces,dear
dkzk
20th Dec 2012 3:41am
20th Dec 2012 5:55am
22nd Dec 2012 9:57pm
There are far too many you's to count;
and yet, you continue to try.
"Foolish" is one word for this,
"Art" is another.
(on my reading list)
and yet, you continue to try.
"Foolish" is one word for this,
"Art" is another.
(on my reading list)
23rd Dec 2012 00:28am
I art foolish in'deed....
(& who's you is who's anyways?)
eye have My Foolish HeArt tattoddled on my arm, in crosshairs of like one'a gunscope things...no joke...there forever til me flesh rots or burns.
Funny ye should 'pick up' on that even dough wee never ever met
glad ye dropped in,WP
(& who's you is who's anyways?)
eye have My Foolish HeArt tattoddled on my arm, in crosshairs of like one'a gunscope things...no joke...there forever til me flesh rots or burns.
Funny ye should 'pick up' on that even dough wee never ever met
glad ye dropped in,WP