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dream
standing at the waters edge.
atmospheric thick with gold dust.
watching.
glowing magenta smoke trapped inside
silver transparent bubbles.
making gentle rhythmic movement
in the breeze.
each one disappearing into the safety
of the bright white fog.
which blankets the most beautiful
green lagoon these eyes have ever witnessed.
atmospheric thick with gold dust.
watching.
glowing magenta smoke trapped inside
silver transparent bubbles.
making gentle rhythmic movement
in the breeze.
each one disappearing into the safety
of the bright white fog.
which blankets the most beautiful
green lagoon these eyes have ever witnessed.
Published 19th Dec 2012
| Edited 20th Dec 2012
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20th Dec 2012 2:46am
Lovely, colorful and ultimately serene... magenta is a favorite color of mine. Quite enjoyed this...
im buzzing you liked this,i nearly used purple or pink.i wasnt sure that many people would know the colour magenta,thank you
8th Jan 2013 3:07am
When they had huge fires in S. Australia I wrote a poem called Magenta Wind... something strange and chaotic about that color works! :-)
30th Dec 2012 6:10am
30th Dec 2012 12:07pm