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The Way I Feel
How he makes me feel
Mann let me tell ya
when otha niggas say you straight,
he say baby you straight killing em,
When i wanna just sit and chill and
relax with my bae,
he always embraces me
instead of pushing me away,
When I wanna talk,other niggas like Oh,
just oh,he like fuck what they think,
gives his input and more,
Otha niggas be like pull down ya
pants and lift up ya skirt,
he be like take off ya pants and
pull off ya shirt,
Otha niggas go fast for a quick nut,
Thinking of themselves and what they
want,
he eases it in,nice and slow,looks me in
my eyes and lets me know,
how good it feels and how good I taste,
never have to ask "baby you cum yet,"
cause he sees it in my face,
When I tell him,I may be with child,
he smiles and says we gon work it out,
while other niggas be like "what the fuck"
or just in denial,
Been thru ups and downs with
a man who was once never mine,but
that didnt keep him nor me from spending
all our time,together,with each other,
his affection,devotion and appreciation
of my mind,body and soul
didnt leave me desperate or careless,
just headstrong,so fuck what you think
cause its how i feel and life goes on...
(sorry for using the N-word so much)
Mann let me tell ya
when otha niggas say you straight,
he say baby you straight killing em,
When i wanna just sit and chill and
relax with my bae,
he always embraces me
instead of pushing me away,
When I wanna talk,other niggas like Oh,
just oh,he like fuck what they think,
gives his input and more,
Otha niggas be like pull down ya
pants and lift up ya skirt,
he be like take off ya pants and
pull off ya shirt,
Otha niggas go fast for a quick nut,
Thinking of themselves and what they
want,
he eases it in,nice and slow,looks me in
my eyes and lets me know,
how good it feels and how good I taste,
never have to ask "baby you cum yet,"
cause he sees it in my face,
When I tell him,I may be with child,
he smiles and says we gon work it out,
while other niggas be like "what the fuck"
or just in denial,
Been thru ups and downs with
a man who was once never mine,but
that didnt keep him nor me from spending
all our time,together,with each other,
his affection,devotion and appreciation
of my mind,body and soul
didnt leave me desperate or careless,
just headstrong,so fuck what you think
cause its how i feel and life goes on...
(sorry for using the N-word so much)
Published 19th Jul 2010
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19th Jul 2010 7:03am
I loved it, straight up loved it. It was deep and I love the fact that you go with your heart and not what other people are whispering in your ear. Stay strong and "to thine own self be true girl".
21st Jul 2010 9:29am
3rd Sep 2014 00:11am
This seemed to be more like a freestyle rap but whatever I loved it and you did an awesome job