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Observational Poems
He was.
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He was.
A lightning bolt exclamation,
a chipped tea cup,
a stopped clock,
my favourite book.
Written by
PaintingShadows
Published
16th Dec 2012
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- Edited 18th Jun 2019 11:37pm
16th Dec 2012 8:15pm
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- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
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Re: He was.
Sublime
16th Dec 2012 8:59pm
It's difficult to tell whether this is a negative metaphor or positive until the end.
Don't know about you, but when I find someone who is deemed worthy to be compared to my favorite book I am marrying him/her XD
My favorite book is forever an unraveling mystery in my mind.
Such a good metaphor.
I hope this reflects positive things that have been happening in your life :)
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GentleStorm
15th May 2013 3:07am
I still just love this.
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