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someone special
i drink your blood and clean your bones,
i want you love, i need
you love,
i cut you with my finger tips
and stitch u up with these kisses
that wont hold,
baby, i dont think you noticed
but im crazy, slowly losin focus,
when your with me all i can think
is why dont we leave this misery
behind
im runnin up the mountain
n im not takin ne breaks,
i wont stop till im at the top, baby
give me all you got, theres no holding back,
were alright yea well be just fine,
tonight ill hold you tight
as i can,
i want you love, i need
you love,
i cut you with my finger tips
and stitch u up with these kisses
that wont hold,
baby, i dont think you noticed
but im crazy, slowly losin focus,
when your with me all i can think
is why dont we leave this misery
behind
im runnin up the mountain
n im not takin ne breaks,
i wont stop till im at the top, baby
give me all you got, theres no holding back,
were alright yea well be just fine,
tonight ill hold you tight
as i can,
Published 13th Dec 2012
| Edited 9th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
13th Dec 2012 12:21pm
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14th Dec 2012 6:46am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
20th Mar 2013 5:05am
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20th Mar 2013 6:03am
reading over this i really want to change a lot of it, if you read it right it sound good i guess but otherwise is sounds like a bunch of drunkenness haha, but thanks.. and not to sound demeaning about myself but what about the poem is it that you like exactly? sorry if thats a stupid question.
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
20th Mar 2013 5:34pm
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20th Mar 2013 10:05pm
its just i have no idea what i was talking about really, just makin metaphors with no real definite meanings anyway. like it kind of does.. and its not that i think its bad because of anything changed. its just simply i dont think this is a good write. i kinda like it too tho idk what im thinkin, my feelings are all gumbbled up for this.