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MY NEW PARTNER
I watched her standing there
she had a kind but sad face
with lovely blue eyes and so beautiful
i fell in love at the first glance.
she had a fantastic body
to go with those lovely legs,
i thought i must have her
so i got talkingto her there and then.
now i had to tell my wife
how would she take it when i told
her i had found someone new
someone to share my life
the next day i left home
and bought that lovely dog
from the kennels
she had a kind but sad face
with lovely blue eyes and so beautiful
i fell in love at the first glance.
she had a fantastic body
to go with those lovely legs,
i thought i must have her
so i got talkingto her there and then.
now i had to tell my wife
how would she take it when i told
her i had found someone new
someone to share my life
the next day i left home
and bought that lovely dog
from the kennels
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Re: MY NEW PARTNER
8th Dec 2012 11:40pm
I love it, knowing you I could not believe what I was reading... until your punchline! Very good one, my friend. Nice puppy...
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10th Jan 2013 1:36pm
Made me laugh, because I didn't guess the end. Such a wise choice as well...
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Anonymous
19th Jun 2013 12:43pm
You had me worried for a while ! Well done
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21st Jun 2013 3:52pm
aaaaawwwww i bet she was a REAL DOG too but hey if u like u like huh? l.o.l. jk... i love my lil irresistable doggie myself... nice ink
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wow...I have lived with dogs most of my life. From what I have been told it is very rare to find one that doesn't have brown to black colored eyes.
Thanks for recommendation...I love it!
Thanks for recommendation...I love it!
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8th Jan 2014 4:54pm
lovely twist
mine was about to stand
till i saw the bitch in ur hands
sporting wife urs
mine was about to stand
till i saw the bitch in ur hands
sporting wife urs
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