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one two swallow a pill
One two swallow a pill
Take away the pain
Three four a couple more
You still feel the same
Blink blink
Stop and think
Your baby’s in her bed
Your teenage son
Is at the match
and you are off your head
so you’re sad
Your mum was cruel
Your dad was bad
and broke the rules
look look
at what you've got
your little family
worth a lot
put your pills
in the bin
fight this fight
you will win
Wake up wake up
Don’t be blue
The sun will shine
Again on you
Take away the pain
Three four a couple more
You still feel the same
Blink blink
Stop and think
Your baby’s in her bed
Your teenage son
Is at the match
and you are off your head
so you’re sad
Your mum was cruel
Your dad was bad
and broke the rules
look look
at what you've got
your little family
worth a lot
put your pills
in the bin
fight this fight
you will win
Wake up wake up
Don’t be blue
The sun will shine
Again on you
Published 6th Dec 2012
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6th Dec 2012 8:38pm
I loved the way it started, it sounded like a lullaby but it broke in the midle. I would love to read it all the way to the end like that.
6th Dec 2012 9:30pm
yes thanks. i need to work with it more. Its not one of my most flowing of pieces. I will see what I can do..
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