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The Journey
Before
Trees blooming to life
Sun overpowering clear blue sky
Wind softly dancing on my skin
Beautiful noises fusing in harmony
The Earth rotating on its axis
You are here
During
Leaves floating down to dead grass
Sun hidden by clouds
Wind sending chills through my body
Raggered breaths break the silence
The Earth is not spinning
You are split in between two worlds
After
No trees or leaves
Grey, black thunderstorms hovering above
Breeze stabbing me body, I am numb
Fuzzy noise like bees in my ears
The Earth? There is only you and me
And now you are gone
You chose to give up
Stopped fighting for us
So I turn my hatred for the world
On to myself
I must have done something wrong
If you don't want me
Trees blooming to life
Sun overpowering clear blue sky
Wind softly dancing on my skin
Beautiful noises fusing in harmony
The Earth rotating on its axis
You are here
During
Leaves floating down to dead grass
Sun hidden by clouds
Wind sending chills through my body
Raggered breaths break the silence
The Earth is not spinning
You are split in between two worlds
After
No trees or leaves
Grey, black thunderstorms hovering above
Breeze stabbing me body, I am numb
Fuzzy noise like bees in my ears
The Earth? There is only you and me
And now you are gone
You chose to give up
Stopped fighting for us
So I turn my hatred for the world
On to myself
I must have done something wrong
If you don't want me
Published 5th Dec 2012
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- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
5th Dec 2012 8:42am
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5th Dec 2012 8:32pm
5th Dec 2012 11:43pm
6th Dec 2012 11:11am
I like the structure and the progression of the piece. You have some nice images here like dead grass and bees in my ears. The emotion in the end is raw and honest.
