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After the "awkward moment"
Inspired by J J Jay's poem "awkward moment", to which this is an imagined sequel, narrated by the man.
Each naked step of the way
She followed me to the hay,
Then got comfy in my arms
And let me enjoy her charms.
Every surface got fondled, kissed….
Now she’s gone, those times are missed,
For sex was fun that night on,
And there was no “other one”.
Each naked step of the way
She followed me to the hay,
Then got comfy in my arms
And let me enjoy her charms.
Every surface got fondled, kissed….
Now she’s gone, those times are missed,
For sex was fun that night on,
And there was no “other one”.
Published 30th Nov 2012
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- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
30th Nov 2012 11:00pm
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
30th Nov 2012 11:08pm
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1st Dec 2012 10:23am
Nice that it did remind you of that seasonal country custom, though I used "the hay" in its metaphorical sense for bed.
3rd Dec 2012 2:10am
3rd Dec 2012 5:27pm
Thank you for the compliment of following my work with one of your own. And I like what you've written. It's a great read.
4th Dec 2012 9:43pm
4th Dec 2012 10:28pm
a beautifully bitter sweet write...made my heart skip a beat...seems we all like a spot in the hay tyvm s1