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Winter Time
Olde Man Winter's here at last,
so no more denying, Autumn's passed.
Looking forward to the Springtime sun,
to go out and play, and swim, and run.
First we must deal with the cold and snow,
before we see the first flowers grow.
(sigh)
so no more denying, Autumn's passed.
Looking forward to the Springtime sun,
to go out and play, and swim, and run.
First we must deal with the cold and snow,
before we see the first flowers grow.
(sigh)
Published 29th Nov 2012
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29th Nov 2012 2:13pm
29th Nov 2012 3:06pm
29th Nov 2012 2:30pm
Aah at first I thought it was going to glorify winter, kept reading "(sigh)" perfect ending. Captures the ambiguity that winter brings; dealing w/the cold & snow, also knowin that spring is coming
29th Nov 2012 3:06pm
Yes, sometimes we have to be patient and bide our time through that which we do not enjoy whilst we wait for the things we do. Thank you for reading.
Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 5:08pm
... and my favorite season is Autumn but I love everything about the Winter season, except the cold! :(
I know! I sound crazy! *shrugs* lol
I know! I sound crazy! *shrugs* lol
29th Nov 2012 9:24pm
You don't sound crazy. Winter would be great if it wasn't for the cold and the snow. I live in New England, but lived in San Diego for a while. Can't wait to back. (sunny and seventy, yeah baby!!)
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10th Dec 2012 9:05pm
Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 5:58pm
Mellow acceptance at its best. Almost a soothing quality that's hard to explain.. very nice.
29th Nov 2012 9:27pm
sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do with what you are given when it's inevitable. thank you for reading.
30th Nov 2012 1:00pm
Nice! There are elements of winter that stir my depths. It is my reading time, and the quiet still of most winter days in nature speaks to me.
30th Nov 2012 3:10pm
I do like curling up next to the fire with a book on a snowy Saturday afternoon; up until I have to go out and shovel so I can get to work. ha ha. I'm glad you liked the poem, and thank you.
1st Dec 2012 7:56pm
2nd Dec 2012 1:30am
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4th Dec 2012 1:40am
My favorite, too. Not too cold, not too hot, snow has melted, sun is out longer, color returns, I could go on. Thank you for reading and glad you liked it.
4th Dec 2012 8:12pm
5th Dec 2012 1:18am
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10th Dec 2012 9:07pm
And it's great to be a part of your writing world as well. thank you very much for the kind words.
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