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ok, ok
down to earth
say it straight
how dare I keep you guessing
make you work
amongst my words infested
with idiosyncratic
static
established in society
waist-deep
you wade
amidst mouths gaping
at your beauty
involuntarily innate
their prying eyes
invade privacy
whilst Somalian Pirates
storm decks
of their prey
aaaahh
but that`s so far away
someday
hollywood will
innacurately portray
those acts
whose details,
at media`s birth hazy
drift from collective memory
the way popcorn
sops up your pay
this mind
liquidly wanders
as you effortlessly saunter
across established stages
I`m barely afloat
doggedly paddle
in self-illusary moat
surrounding my crumbling temples
struggling through self-control
off-base urges
to existentially tremble
meander aimlessly
in eternal preamble
see how I`m challenged?
the vortex
pulls me to ramble
immersed in self
so flappable
I`m awed
voyeurestically view
YOU
in casual navigation
long-leggedly
triple-lutz through
gas station bathrooms
walmart
and exhaust fumes
your comfortable
habitat
well-adjusted-to
is my
un-resolveable
rubik`s cube
down to earth
say it straight
how dare I keep you guessing
make you work
amongst my words infested
with idiosyncratic
static
established in society
waist-deep
you wade
amidst mouths gaping
at your beauty
involuntarily innate
their prying eyes
invade privacy
whilst Somalian Pirates
storm decks
of their prey
aaaahh
but that`s so far away
someday
hollywood will
innacurately portray
those acts
whose details,
at media`s birth hazy
drift from collective memory
the way popcorn
sops up your pay
this mind
liquidly wanders
as you effortlessly saunter
across established stages
I`m barely afloat
doggedly paddle
in self-illusary moat
surrounding my crumbling temples
struggling through self-control
off-base urges
to existentially tremble
meander aimlessly
in eternal preamble
see how I`m challenged?
the vortex
pulls me to ramble
immersed in self
so flappable
I`m awed
voyeurestically view
YOU
in casual navigation
long-leggedly
triple-lutz through
gas station bathrooms
walmart
and exhaust fumes
your comfortable
habitat
well-adjusted-to
is my
un-resolveable
rubik`s cube
Published 29th Nov 2012
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
29th Nov 2012 9:53am
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6th Dec 2012 3:19am
Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 1:52pm
"your comfortable
habitat
well-adjusted-to
is my
un-resolveable
rubik`s cube" <---Having trouble figuring her out, huh?! lol..
I'll tell you this, there have been times where I had to pull out my dictionary to understand YOU! lol. Im not the least bit embarrassed about that. Knowledge is power and my mind stays open.
All jokes aside, you have left me yet again in awe over your ink! I just LOVE the way you write! :-)
habitat
well-adjusted-to
is my
un-resolveable
rubik`s cube" <---Having trouble figuring her out, huh?! lol..
I'll tell you this, there have been times where I had to pull out my dictionary to understand YOU! lol. Im not the least bit embarrassed about that. Knowledge is power and my mind stays open.
All jokes aside, you have left me yet again in awe over your ink! I just LOVE the way you write! :-)
6th Dec 2012 3:21am
Yup --- and the one I can figure out aint
available anymore !
you make me blush with your effusive praise...
I`m honored that you like my stuff so much : > )