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Never be ashamed
I love the sweet smells.
I love the dirty ones.
I love your rolling sweat.
I love your glistening body.
I love the salty tastes.
I love the iron tastes.
I love the pop pop as you smoke the gun.
I love the moan when i make you cum.
I love the screams when i fuck you.
I love when you cry,when i make love to you.
I love the aftermath.
I love the new story our sheets tell.
I just love you.
I love the dirty ones.
I love your rolling sweat.
I love your glistening body.
I love the salty tastes.
I love the iron tastes.
I love the pop pop as you smoke the gun.
I love the moan when i make you cum.
I love the screams when i fuck you.
I love when you cry,when i make love to you.
I love the aftermath.
I love the new story our sheets tell.
I just love you.
Published 25th Nov 2012
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25th Nov 2012 5:37am
I love everything about this poem. I love the title. I love its rawness.I live its truth.I love that it keeps me wanting more and im not ashamed of that.
25th Nov 2012 9:19am
25th Nov 2012 3:36pm
Great poem!
" I love the new story our sheets tell. "
^^^love that line^^^
Thanks for sharing!
" I love the new story our sheets tell. "
^^^love that line^^^
Thanks for sharing!
25th Nov 2012 7:19pm
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26th Nov 2012 3:31pm
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26th Nov 2012 3:54pm
Its a great buzz to get such a lovely comment,im really glad you liked it, Thank you
26th Nov 2012 10:40pm
27th Nov 2012 4:45am
First time ive had one of my poems called sexy.Thats wicked.Im glad you enjoyed it.
27th Nov 2012 4:39pm
Love the visions and illusions presented...can feel the admiration and love in the words!
27th Nov 2012 6:51pm
30th Dec 2012 6:18am
I liked it but the I love killed it for me. To many reads better without them
Like this is a punch
That pop pop as you smoke the gun.
moan when i make you cum.
screams when i fuck you.
and how you cry,when i make love to you.
the aftermath
a new story our sheets tell.
I just love to love you.
Like this is a punch
That pop pop as you smoke the gun.
moan when i make you cum.
screams when i fuck you.
and how you cry,when i make love to you.
the aftermath
a new story our sheets tell.
I just love to love you.
30th Dec 2012 12:01pm
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20th Mar 2013 7:42pm
30th Mar 2013 2:54am
I love this ;)
My heart was racing!
"I love the screams when I fuck you ".....Awesome!!!
My heart was racing!
"I love the screams when I fuck you ".....Awesome!!!
30th Mar 2013 12:14pm