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what is a thought provoker?
the side you must clamber
the ravine you scrape through
the cliff you knot ropes down
the abyss you retreat from
the boulders that crash loud,
and you quickly side step
the lava that spews forth,
which you flee without pause
the valley so peaceful,
its waters flow and soothe
the shelter that affords
you a place to call home
submitted for the "Dangerous, Strange, Lost.. or Whatever.." competition, where each poet's rank is the inspiration. This poem is about the rank, not about any particular poet.
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Re: thought provoker
21st Nov 2012 7:03pm
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21st Nov 2012 7:07pm
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21st Nov 2012 7:12pm
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re: Re: thought provoker
21st Nov 2012 7:24pm
..maybe I should have had more lava in there... heh.
Thanks for your comment, Strider.
Thanks for your comment, Strider.
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21st Nov 2012 7:46pm
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re: Re: thought provoker
21st Nov 2012 8:23pm
Hmm, ok. Looks like there's a consensus, so far. Thanks for the comment, Broomie.
Re: thought provoker
21st Nov 2012 8:54pm
All those obsticles we must maneuver around through out life make those peaceful times all the more enjoyable and relaxing. Great visual throughout and a soothing end.
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re: Re: thought provoker
21st Nov 2012 9:10pm
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21st Nov 2012 11:43pm
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22nd Nov 2012 6:22am
Re: thought provoker
22nd Nov 2012 1:46am
I love it! Reminds me of Minecraft. Or maybe I've been playing Minecraft too much, and everything reminds me of it. Either way, it's great!
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22nd Nov 2012 6:23am
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2012 9:25pm
The world is harsh ... thank God for that place of sanctuary! Nicely done.
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25th Nov 2012 9:36pm
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re: Re: thought provoker
LOL, Jack, this was written for the comp, where our rank is supposed to be the inspiration. I was "thought provoker" when I wrote it, then wouldn't you know - awkwardness! - my rank changed. I still don't know how these rank things work, really.
I'll make a note about the competition above...
Edit: OK, OK, I changed the title too.
I'll make a note about the competition above...
Edit: OK, OK, I changed the title too.
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27th Nov 2012 7:42pm
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27th Nov 2012 7:45pm
Re: what is a thought provoker?
10th Dec 2012 8:34pm
Great write Atakti... You nailed your point to the wall with this one.. Nice!! Thank you..
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re: Re: what is a thought provoker?
10th Dec 2012 9:12pm
Re: what is a thought provoker?
10th Dec 2012 8:39pm
Oh Hell Yeah ! and Bam !
Thought Provoker indeed... Your structure, and movement in this Atakti is perfect !
My fave of yours thus far :)
Thought Provoker indeed... Your structure, and movement in this Atakti is perfect !
My fave of yours thus far :)
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re: Re: what is a thought provoker?
10th Dec 2012 9:13pm