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Falling Snow
Peaceful
Is a word I'd use
For the drifting sight.
A snowfall
For the ages
That has everything in white.
I wake up from soft slumber
And crawl out of my bed
To see the little snowflakes
That dance around my head.
Simple and so beautiful
The first snow always seems
It's too bad my little neighbors
Stomp inside my snowy dream.
Is a word I'd use
For the drifting sight.
A snowfall
For the ages
That has everything in white.
I wake up from soft slumber
And crawl out of my bed
To see the little snowflakes
That dance around my head.
Simple and so beautiful
The first snow always seems
It's too bad my little neighbors
Stomp inside my snowy dream.
Published 20th Nov 2012
| Edited 13th Dec 2012
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2012 00:05am
I liked this one ... especially the last line. Nice job!
13th Dec 2012 1:35pm
wow that is so good...you just get all those bad feelings filed away in perspective and feel at one with the world...then some b or b comes along and poos on it...
23rd Dec 2012 4:43am
Little neighbors literally or figuratively? (laugh)
Snow is such a powerful symbol for so many things and then you add the fact that it falls!
Reminds me a bit of pretty the rain drops can be---and then I hear a BAM as two cars have collided.
Snow is such a powerful symbol for so many things and then you add the fact that it falls!
Reminds me a bit of pretty the rain drops can be---and then I hear a BAM as two cars have collided.
11th Oct 2013 10:11pm
