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Beating Heart
I have no feelings twords anything
All I feel is empty and numb
There is nothing more cruel,sadistic
Than a broken heart
You mean more to me than words can convey
I think of you night and day
For in my silence I was stumbling,studdering
and wondering what I wanted to say
Maybe if my heart stops beating
It won't hurt this much
Can a heart still break after it's stop beating?
When I hear your name I stop breathing
I see your face in every place
If I had to choose
Between breathing
I would use my last breath to say
"I LOVE YOU"
All I feel is empty and numb
There is nothing more cruel,sadistic
Than a broken heart
You mean more to me than words can convey
I think of you night and day
For in my silence I was stumbling,studdering
and wondering what I wanted to say
Maybe if my heart stops beating
It won't hurt this much
Can a heart still break after it's stop beating?
When I hear your name I stop breathing
I see your face in every place
If I had to choose
Between breathing
I would use my last breath to say
"I LOVE YOU"
Published 17th Nov 2012
| Edited 18th Nov 2012
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17th Nov 2012 6:29pm
I have felt this way, I was sooooo busy loving him I forgot about loving myself.
love yourself first, you cant love anyone if you don't love yourself! :)
write on
love yourself first, you cant love anyone if you don't love yourself! :)
write on
How true. a lesson I have learned finally this is another onr pulled from my older writeings but figured I would still share them
Thanks for your comments and I'm glad you liked it
DD
Thanks for your comments and I'm glad you liked it
DD
17th Nov 2012 6:32pm
this is so sad but wonderfully expressed...heartbreak is so hard....this is how i felt while going through my divorce except for the ending...
So glad you could to relate to this Faith, I wrote this while going through a breakup with my fiance. Glad you liked it
17th Nov 2012 8:32pm
18th Nov 2012 3:21am
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18th Nov 2012 3:23am
Thanks Strider,
hopefully this goes away before to long
tired of this feeling.
DD
hopefully this goes away before to long
tired of this feeling.
DD
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18th Nov 2012 10:11pm
Oh Magdalena how hard that must have been for you;
I wrote this when out of the blue my fiance decided that marrigae was not for him and up and moved 2000 thousand miles away and just left me a note on my nightstand and to this day I have never heard from him and that was a little over a year ago, but time heals all wounds they say :) I'm golad you liked it
DD
I wrote this when out of the blue my fiance decided that marrigae was not for him and up and moved 2000 thousand miles away and just left me a note on my nightstand and to this day I have never heard from him and that was a little over a year ago, but time heals all wounds they say :) I'm golad you liked it
DD