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The Siren's Kiss
She's beautiful
Breath-taking
She's magical
Life taking
Her appearance
Draws one in
Then she kills
With a kiss
Her body is unforgettable
It is impossible not to notice
There is no way to escape
You will be kissed
This is who she is
A beautiful girl
Amazing lips
Whose kisses kill
Breath-taking
She's magical
Life taking
Her appearance
Draws one in
Then she kills
With a kiss
Her body is unforgettable
It is impossible not to notice
There is no way to escape
You will be kissed
This is who she is
A beautiful girl
Amazing lips
Whose kisses kill
Published 17th Nov 2012
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17th Nov 2012 7:49pm
17th Nov 2012 8:10pm
18th Nov 2012 2:00am
Okay, don't get me wrong, this is a cool poem and all, but...I don't think describing a siren this way is acurate at alllll. It's not a sirens appearance but her voice that drove the fishermen into the rocks, right? Or maybe I've confused a Siren for something else? I don't know.
You probably have some concept that makes this make sense, but my clueless mind can not seem to comprehend.
You probably have some concept that makes this make sense, but my clueless mind can not seem to comprehend.
18th Nov 2012 2:34am
Well yes, I couldn't find something better that fits this description. If you have an idea, please tell.
18th Nov 2012 2:49am
18th Nov 2012 3:50am
I could see how to say it's a siren, for usually when you hear a siren, it shows something bad is coming, and in this the kiss kills. So if you think about it, the siren could be the person.
18th Nov 2012 4:18am
22nd Nov 2012 1:59pm
