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Barely Living
Another birthday goes by
And Daddy still misses you
He deleted all his poems
because they were painful
But now what does he do?
He writes yet another poem for you
Maybe because you're always in my thoughts
Tearing me apart and making me beg
Mercy would have taken me the day you died
Yet,
Unfortunately I'm still here
Alive, but barely living.
And Daddy still misses you
He deleted all his poems
because they were painful
But now what does he do?
He writes yet another poem for you
Maybe because you're always in my thoughts
Tearing me apart and making me beg
Mercy would have taken me the day you died
Yet,
Unfortunately I'm still here
Alive, but barely living.
Published 15th Nov 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:36pm
15th Nov 2012 10:01am
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15th Nov 2012 10:02am
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:36pm
15th Nov 2012 10:03am
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15th Nov 2012 12:00pm
I agree, it's strong feelings of pain and hurt. Did the poetry ease things last time? Humbled that you share this.
15th Nov 2012 12:44pm
wowwww really touched. i make poems of this sort more. poetry shouldn't b bout only sex; love, n happy moments... its more beautiful and relieving to put down sad moments we cant forget. its lyk talkin to different people to feel what you feel in agony... thumbs.. beautiful
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:56pm
21st Nov 2012 4:44am
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