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please help add in descriptions of humanity and Tragedies please I need help with Kid D. Doom

In the beginning there was...
Me
Hi, my names Kid D. Doom
Mhm
That's my name
But back on track
*clears throat*
I'm the beginning there was noting!
But me
All alone
In the dark void
Born cold and alone and omnipotent all seeing and all powerful
I know
Why should you feel bad for me
My life already seems amazing
Fuck i'm drifting off again
Oh well here the story goes
And I was bored
So I spoke and spoke
It lit up the sky
The Sparks from my words filled with energy
And they said through the darkness and glimmered and shined
my simple mind was mesmerized until I realized my space was still empty
I had allot of space to play
I made toys
Out of this thing I made it was moldable and I molded them into balls if multi colors
And I played joyously
But soon they became hard and Sharp
And one day one cut me
And i'm my anger I threw them with explosive force with a great heat and flash
Spreading them through my play space
I realized how extensive it was
And how cold it must become
and how cold I felt
I made a big ball of fire from the combusting power of words and made a big ball to heat the universe
But now I had nothing so I took the remainder if my toys
and smashed them together to create
A beautiful emerald gem
That I deemed fit for others to live on so I took clay of the earth
And shaped them into my image, breathing life into them
I gave them everything
And they disobeyed me
So I broke them apart
And told then to survive on their own
I left for years attempting to see my other toys and create life but none lasted
And I wished
I hoped
In my naive little mind
They had learned
I ran back tripping all the way
And came to see monstrous beasts
Of odd proportions
Reptilian beasts and animalistic humans
I shouldn't stand to see such creatures walking my beauty
And I screamed in anger obliterating every single thing
I had to rebuild and so I did
But the brother spilled blood of own kin
And I walked to the other side of the universe to find something to fix
The way they thought
As I walked across the lights
I feel upon a beauty
A heavenly being
Named hope
And her pet named, love
And Bitch friend destiny
And her six little sisters Jealousy, Joyously, Sorrow, Violence, Peace, and Anger
I loved Hope
and put up with the rest and brought them back to see
My living children
And as we approached
I felt something was wrong
I cringed in pain
Seeing the terrors odd which they had done
And one heard my sigh
Took all living creations that he could fit
Into a big structure to hide from my rage but Hope said wait
let him be
But Sorrow it broke her little heart and she cried for 40 cycles of heat and cold
Washing away the rest
And I figured out what needed to be
And within the new children I allowed the others to tamper with
With my consent
They built my creations consciences
Shared words that we spoke and music they sung
Each became a Goddess and they made perfect mates to be worshipped
And I just wanted hope
Mrs. Hope Doom
didn't sound right
So I didn't build up the...courage?
Yes that fire in the belly
And my creations grew with affection from each including violence and anger
And I let it occur preoccupied with love
I got brief glimpses of things occurrences to be
I heard prayers and thoughts
Until a great outcry caught my ear!
The world was overtaken!
Violence had enslaved the others after winning a bet over a race!
She made the creations fight by taking advantage of anger and jealousy
Hope had grown weak trapped in a box
I had to take out back and so I sent violence away into the blackness of our space
She had shown them fire and metal
And how to make them burn and burst and scream
How to inflict pain
They had nailed men to Crosses
they had killed peace's son
I freed hope and found peace
Dead upon the fire of my words made millions of years ago she burned and her Ashes fell upon the eyes of some she had killed herself in her sorrow
So I asked then what they needed and they said something to end all pain
Something heavenly and untamed
I ripped off a piece of the stars and placed it within their minds but they took it and locked it in a metal box and made more and more within these coffins
They found hope
And misinterpreted her words
And they rained stars from the skies
And the fire rose to my eyes and I yelled and I screamed
At what they had done
I tried to rain words from above but hope stopped me
Violence had returned
And I had to run away
From the view of then burning
And killing fellow men
The birth of children with hate in their hearts
Destiny had said give then free will
And it took a turn for the worse
Hope hid and I stay to this day as the treacherous emotions whisper in their ear
It was doom...
And they curse my name...
I am the wronged end of my creation...
I am Kid. D Doom
Written by KahakuHiga-Parker
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