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TRUST (acrostic-tanka)
Take me in your arms
Risk your life without question
Unfolds through my eyes
Secret you kept for yourself
Told to no one but myself
Risk your life without question
Unfolds through my eyes
Secret you kept for yourself
Told to no one but myself
Published 7th Nov 2012
| Edited 3rd Dec 2012
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7th Nov 2012 7:10pm
7th Nov 2012 7:15pm
Thank you Ms. Nikki...I was still editing it when you commented.
I'm trying my hand in Tanka which was introduced to me by Mr. Bruce Burkard. Would appreciate if you can help me come out with 5-letter words, so I can write some more tanka verses. Once again, thanks!
I'm trying my hand in Tanka which was introduced to me by Mr. Bruce Burkard. Would appreciate if you can help me come out with 5-letter words, so I can write some more tanka verses. Once again, thanks!
11th Nov 2012 3:51pm
Beautifully Done ... My best wishes to you always ... Love and Peace ... Brfuce
11th Nov 2012 4:43pm
Thank you very much Mr. Burkard for opening my eyes to a new form of poetry. It's both a challenge and fun at the same time.