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No Commercial Breaks
One minute wonders
One minute drags
They’ve raised the price of cigarettes
Filters between drags.
Let the brainwashing commence
No silence found in anyplace
Say good bye to common sense.
Corporations snigger while laughing
I just forgot the show I was just watching.
These one minute wonders
have gone too far
Why do I have the sudden urge
to take out car insurance
When I don’t own a car?
In one minute, I could have told her
In one minute, I could hold her.
Like being tortured slowly
with thumbs screws tied to the rack,
60 seconds gone in a minute
that i will never get back.
One minute drags
They’ve raised the price of cigarettes
Filters between drags.
Let the brainwashing commence
No silence found in anyplace
Say good bye to common sense.
Corporations snigger while laughing
I just forgot the show I was just watching.
These one minute wonders
have gone too far
Why do I have the sudden urge
to take out car insurance
When I don’t own a car?
In one minute, I could have told her
In one minute, I could hold her.
Like being tortured slowly
with thumbs screws tied to the rack,
60 seconds gone in a minute
that i will never get back.
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
5th Nov 2012 7:56pm
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Re: No Commercial Breaks
5th Nov 2012 8:07pm
Cheers buddy i really hate adverts i can never rememeber what show i was watching when they show up and ruin it lol
many thanks for reading
marcus
many thanks for reading
marcus
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
5th Nov 2012 8:29pm
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re: Re: No Commercial Breaks
5th Nov 2012 9:22pm
Thank you kindly, know the advert you mean its horrid advert i feel the same about the "halifax adverts" with the choir murdering 80's pop classics and the go compare adverts. I guess they do there jobs well if they get under are skin lol
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: No Commercial Breaks
5th Nov 2012 9:46pm
re: Re: No Commercial Breaks
5th Nov 2012 11:53pm
Cheers faith adverts suck and then you get the jingle stuick in your mind lol
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: No Commercial Breaks
5th Nov 2012 10:07pm
re: Re: No Commercial Breaks
5th Nov 2012 11:52pm
Lol thats almost as good as "the snitch box" as is now known in marcus land. im made to watch "the zombie machine" lol
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Anonymous
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5th Nov 2012 11:54pm
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re: Re: No Commercial Breaks
5th Nov 2012 11:59pm
lol cheers my freind i think it would be a case of "off with his head" along with "one is not amused" lol
cheers for reading dude
marcus
cheers for reading dude
marcus
Re: No Commercial Breaks
6th Nov 2012 3:11am
re: Re: No Commercial Breaks
6th Nov 2012 7:56am
Re: No Commercial Breaks
6th Nov 2012 8:27am
extremely relatable c0ntent. Apart for the lines
'In one minute, I could have told her
In one minute, I could hold her.' :-)
'In one minute, I could have told her
In one minute, I could hold her.' :-)
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re: Re: No Commercial Breaks
6th Nov 2012 9:11pm
Re: No Commercial Breaks
6th Nov 2012 3:36pm
Hmm The aye's have it, very relateable piece Z, this one can be felt in the soul of many.
Red
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re: Re: No Commercial Breaks
6th Nov 2012 9:13pm
indeed, I now mute the sound when the pesky one minute wonders make a appreance lol
many thanks
marcus
many thanks
marcus