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already lost
This battle's already lost.
I'm going to die anyways, why wait?
Tell me lifes beautiful and living it is a gift.
Tell me to be grateful to a man I never knew.
Tell me about all this great shit he did,
I say screw you.
This battle's already lost.
I'm going to die anyways, can't fight fate.
If lifes so beautiful, then why is there so much pain?
Say thanks to a man who only helped a faithful few?
I say screw him.
The battle's already lost.
I'm going to die anyways...
Why wait.
I'm going to die anyways, why wait?
Tell me lifes beautiful and living it is a gift.
Tell me to be grateful to a man I never knew.
Tell me about all this great shit he did,
I say screw you.
This battle's already lost.
I'm going to die anyways, can't fight fate.
If lifes so beautiful, then why is there so much pain?
Say thanks to a man who only helped a faithful few?
I say screw him.
The battle's already lost.
I'm going to die anyways...
Why wait.
Published 5th Nov 2012
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5th Nov 2012 2:25pm
This poem is really fantastic but could be fixed with a little more attention to capitalization and grammar. Make sure to capitalize all the words at the start of every line and to use commas and apostrophes It is a good poem and just needs little fixes. Well done :)
5th Nov 2012 6:28pm
Thank you for the advice. I'm the kind of person that rushes most things and skips the little details in my writting. I took you advice and ran threw to fix things, and you were right :) Much better now! haha thank you.
