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death?
illusioned existence'
narrow margin shed
newborn changeling
far from formless
conscious cloud
immune to weather
unchained spirit
flies off tether
burden bared
sentence commuted
prison break
from mute cucoon
wondering
wandering
impossible
to squander
lighter than air
meatless prescence
immune to stars
exploring crescents
expand at will
experience all
in solitude shrink
sub-atomic ball
freedom from bruise
and carbon burn
gone are worries
physical concerns
one thing Moses
didnt scribe quite right:
extent of Gifted
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Published 28th Oct 2012
| Edited 29th Oct 2012
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28th Oct 2012 1:06am
Ah, the unburdening of the Cult of Idolatry....Christianity....Drive on!
encouragement such as yours
prods me from my default of lethargic resistance....
thanks!
prods me from my default of lethargic resistance....
thanks!
28th Oct 2012 1:30am
Pierce the connectivity then of the inner sanctum of the Cult...how it's base is the Law, and how still married to the Law it cannot know Christ. The Legalist mind has no understanding of the Unconditional Mind of God....It must first have been dead to marry Him......at every turn, they argue that we must accept and yet who in eternity accepted the original condemnation of Adam, but rather we were imputed with condemnation....The argument fails. We are imputed then with Grace, we have made no such decision, but rather in an arranged marriage we became the Bride...bought by the Groom from the Father...we can make no such choice..We are bought and sold with a price, and have no free will to be redeemed or not. Without shame, because we are freed from the Law.....Free from the Cult. Your piece is brilliant and the analysis is spectacular! rt87
28th Oct 2012 1:41am
yo man --
you plumb depths thus far beyond me ---
yet I will snorkel on .......
you plumb depths thus far beyond me ---
yet I will snorkel on .......
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29th Oct 2012 1:24pm
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