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gratify.
I want the skies to open up
and mystify,
the lines of a literary masterpiece to gratify,
my limited heights are terrifying
I want a love that'll silence,
ignite my defying nature,
I want to become,
one.
All around,
I wanted skies to open up,
and mystify,
gratify,
defy,
ignite,
goobye,
goodnight.
and mystify,
the lines of a literary masterpiece to gratify,
my limited heights are terrifying
I want a love that'll silence,
ignite my defying nature,
I want to become,
one.
All around,
I wanted skies to open up,
and mystify,
gratify,
defy,
ignite,
goobye,
goodnight.
Published 25th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2012 3:09am
Your style of writing is so attractive! Enjoyed this! xo
1st Jan 2013 3:45pm
enchanting use of brevity without missing anything
I enjoyed that immensly
I enjoyed that immensly
10th Apr 2013 3:30am
I really enjoyed this. "my limited heights are terrifying" <-- i am not 100% sure what you mean by this line but it jerks my mind into a handful of directions and i like it.
10th Apr 2013 3:41am
thank you very much :))
what I meant by the line was, as low as my heights are they still scare me. Does that clarify it a bit? should I change the wording?
what I meant by the line was, as low as my heights are they still scare me. Does that clarify it a bit? should I change the wording?
