Last Wish

nice..... very nicely put....
Kinda cryptic too, I might add...
But I like it..

Indeed, there is a lot of me in this little poem.

Thank you Kourt.  I've been back and forth whether or not I should have even attempted to share anything.  I feel I do have a distinct voice, style, what-have-you, but I also think that I can do better- always better.  Lately I feel like I've stagnated and have been too distracted by rhyme.  I think it's time to get away from that crutch to focus more on imagery. At least that is my goal.

I think I have great ideas (narcissistic maybe?), but I feel like they are held back because I feel compelled to rhyme since it's "my thing" and it's done well for me in the past.  It's time for me to expand.

Narcissistic, smarshisistic...Confidence is the key...some ooze it. some don't...I say ooze away.
Love this one Narcy. Its your time to shine...

good

This conjures up my first reaction to David Bowie when he was in his Ziggy Stardust Days. The last sentence is classic!

baptized in bong water is the coolest fucking thing I have ever heard

Thank you for your enthusiasm.