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Nothing Being Held Back
Yes ma'am reporting for duty
my pleasure soldier ready for tour
Quite active even without your touch
what do you want my dick for?
Have you been dreaming about darker meat
standing erect and ready for play
Addiction what you suffer
need it day after day
For sure there is a plethora of men
who want to fuck you like a doll
Not caring who is watching
I would do you in the mall
And then there are those mammaries
god I want to stick it between them
Hear you moan in pleasure
leaving some semen
Welcome to taste my seed
drink all that you like
They say once you do
it is like riding on a bike
The main attraction is coming
unleashed inside you is my lance
Loud sounds from us both of satisfaction
when we complete our risque bed dance
my pleasure soldier ready for tour
Quite active even without your touch
what do you want my dick for?
Have you been dreaming about darker meat
standing erect and ready for play
Addiction what you suffer
need it day after day
For sure there is a plethora of men
who want to fuck you like a doll
Not caring who is watching
I would do you in the mall
And then there are those mammaries
god I want to stick it between them
Hear you moan in pleasure
leaving some semen
Welcome to taste my seed
drink all that you like
They say once you do
it is like riding on a bike
The main attraction is coming
unleashed inside you is my lance
Loud sounds from us both of satisfaction
when we complete our risque bed dance
Published 20th Oct 2012
| Edited 21st Oct 2012
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20th Oct 2012 3:45pm
Hi there, my buddy JAZZ...not in the mall bro. you could get cited for indecent exposure or whatever case that is...I guess that's your fantasy - as always, fun to read your piece.
20th Oct 2012 3:49pm
20th Oct 2012 4:17pm
Very fun write! "Pleasure soldier"....gave me some ideas JAZZ, LOL. MilkyS
20th Oct 2012 7:22pm
Jazz,
I love the way you wrote this poem
Come read to me but not alone
Your friends can watch as you fuck me
You said you don't care who might see
Impale my body with your big dick
Let my tits squeeze your chocolate stick
Please go ahead and make a mess
By spraying cum on my big breasts
In all seriousness, I was floored when I found this in my inbox this morning. It is so sweet of you to take the time to write this for me. The thing that sets you apart from a lot of other men, Jazz, is that you have a ton of respect for women and you don't compromise that respect in exchange for fulfillment of your kinks and fetishes and that commands my respect for you. For that reason, I was honored to be your muse for this piece. Thank you Jazz. I'm sorry I commented more on you than the poem but sometimes the author deserves friendly feedback for his personality rather than just his poetry. ;)
Holly
I love the way you wrote this poem
Come read to me but not alone
Your friends can watch as you fuck me
You said you don't care who might see
Impale my body with your big dick
Let my tits squeeze your chocolate stick
Please go ahead and make a mess
By spraying cum on my big breasts
In all seriousness, I was floored when I found this in my inbox this morning. It is so sweet of you to take the time to write this for me. The thing that sets you apart from a lot of other men, Jazz, is that you have a ton of respect for women and you don't compromise that respect in exchange for fulfillment of your kinks and fetishes and that commands my respect for you. For that reason, I was honored to be your muse for this piece. Thank you Jazz. I'm sorry I commented more on you than the poem but sometimes the author deserves friendly feedback for his personality rather than just his poetry. ;)
Holly
20th Oct 2012 8:46pm
Well the reality is I actually had two muses---I "fused" together an image of one woman from two different writers on here; one I knew a fair amount about and the other I knew much less. (you)
20th Oct 2012 8:51pm
I don't feel any less honored, Jazz, but your honesty is appreciated. What I want to know is who this sexy muse is! I think I might try to steal her from you for a few hours of girl on girl fun! ;)
20th Oct 2012 9:32pm
21st Oct 2012 7:08am
Another highly erotic poem that I have been reading tonight. Definitely gets the imagination going and makes me think of.....
Well, I'll leave that for another time.
Well done Jazzmanor and I am also curious who your other muse is, not that you'd ever tell. :)
Well, I'll leave that for another time.
Well done Jazzmanor and I am also curious who your other muse is, not that you'd ever tell. :)
21st Oct 2012 7:34am
laughing...not sure it matters much! Not like I live in the same state of any of the lovely female writers even if they weren't taken! :)
I am glad you enjoyed it with--- Oregon getting back to rain all day, a poem or two can be a nice break!
I am glad you enjoyed it with--- Oregon getting back to rain all day, a poem or two can be a nice break!
I particularly like the lines
"For sure there is a plethora of men
who want to fuck you like a doll"
A man who can use the word "plethora" in a poem... mmmmm :)
"For sure there is a plethora of men
who want to fuck you like a doll"
A man who can use the word "plethora" in a poem... mmmmm :)
23rd Oct 2012 3:15pm
Oh my dad for years creamed me at Scrabble for years and used "plethora". The first time I thought he made it up!
Thanks!
Thanks!