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I'm Screaming
I'm screaming
You don't notice because you're worried about other things
I'm screaming
You're too busy losing your mind to care
I'm screaming
You're waiting for something for nothing for everything
I'm screaming
'Cause the way you don't care really isn't fair
I'm screaming
'Cause your words sting though they have no meaning
I'm screaming
'Cause you won't realize what I won't share
I'm screaming
My heart is being torn by the absence of you
I'm screaming
There are so many things, real small, you can do
I'm screaming
'Cause I'm confused yet elated with images of loving you
I'm screaming
At the reality that is real, the one that's true
I'm screaming
But also waiting patiently, for the day I truly hate you
You don't notice because you're worried about other things
I'm screaming
You're too busy losing your mind to care
I'm screaming
You're waiting for something for nothing for everything
I'm screaming
'Cause the way you don't care really isn't fair
I'm screaming
'Cause your words sting though they have no meaning
I'm screaming
'Cause you won't realize what I won't share
I'm screaming
My heart is being torn by the absence of you
I'm screaming
There are so many things, real small, you can do
I'm screaming
'Cause I'm confused yet elated with images of loving you
I'm screaming
At the reality that is real, the one that's true
I'm screaming
But also waiting patiently, for the day I truly hate you
Published 18th Oct 2012
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18th Oct 2012 1:36pm
I like how this poem could have a few different ways of being looked at; a pained personal relationship, a wishful parental relationship, an wanting relationship with society, or a desparate pleading with a deity. love it.
19th Oct 2012 10:30am
"I'm screaming
But also waiting patiently, for the day I truly hate you"---- utterly brilliant. agony turning into anger...it ll change many broken hearts
into new ones... murderously inspirational ...people will live to love instead of dying for failure....
But also waiting patiently, for the day I truly hate you"---- utterly brilliant. agony turning into anger...it ll change many broken hearts
into new ones... murderously inspirational ...people will live to love instead of dying for failure....
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14th Mar 2013 5:29am
that last line was perfect! loved the flow and structure of this piece! Very well written! Good job!
28th Mar 2013 2:04am
Wow...that is so powerful, and something I think most people can relate to at some point in their lives. That made my heart hurt for you.
Really, really good.
Really, really good.
12th Apr 2013 10:43am
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