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Broken
a stained glass vase
put upon a shelf
dulled from years of no sun
you could see the beauty when you looked real close and squinted your eyes just a bit
each curve was there
and it still held the fake flowers from years past
pushed it fell to pieces
feet threatened to take shards away
but one single person fought to save this vase
put it back together
sliver by sliver
then placed it where the sun would shine on it's broken frame
it still sits holding it's own flowers
glued together
ugly at times
but standing tall
Though it seems at first glance
to be perfectly whole
it's not
it's still very much broken
(Ty milkyway)
put upon a shelf
dulled from years of no sun
you could see the beauty when you looked real close and squinted your eyes just a bit
each curve was there
and it still held the fake flowers from years past
pushed it fell to pieces
feet threatened to take shards away
but one single person fought to save this vase
put it back together
sliver by sliver
then placed it where the sun would shine on it's broken frame
it still sits holding it's own flowers
glued together
ugly at times
but standing tall
Though it seems at first glance
to be perfectly whole
it's not
it's still very much broken
(Ty milkyway)
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30th Oct 2012 5:09am
Totally thinking the same thing after I read this one. Great words. =)
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12th Oct 2012 6:46am
Alip you're so sweet thank you. And I worried about clumsily. I added it because I'm so clumsy but yet it doesn't fit right. I agree
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12th Oct 2012 8:45am
It's got a wonderful introspective type quality with good analogy.
...it still sits holding its own flowers...
I really dig this poem. Keepin' it real Miss Gigi.
...it still sits holding its own flowers...
I really dig this poem. Keepin' it real Miss Gigi.
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12th Oct 2012 9:06am
A moving piece wrapped in fragile sadness... Appearences can be deceiving, esspecially when painting over the layers of dust from too many years sitting on a shelf. But where vases stay broken, hearts are not made of Humpty Dumpty shells that cannot heal... jj
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Anonymous
1st Nov 2012 7:35pm
I read so many different stories between these lines. It's a fascinating write. And beautifully done.
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