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scarred
I cut my face so I look like I'm smiling.
I may look fine to you,
But really, inside I'm dying.
I may not look like i care,
But really care more than ever.
I regret every scar i have for the ties that i've severed.
Just look me in the eye and tell me you'll stay.
If you don't I'll lose my mind and start to fade away.[/font]
I may look fine to you,
But really, inside I'm dying.
I may not look like i care,
But really care more than ever.
I regret every scar i have for the ties that i've severed.
Just look me in the eye and tell me you'll stay.
If you don't I'll lose my mind and start to fade away.[/font]
Published 19th May 2010
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22nd May 2010 3:22am
a message given short and sweetly. actually it is the anguish and despair in the words which make it sweet, desperation to have some one stay and the guilt of a dark past are embedded nicely in this poem.
keep on writing :)
keep on writing :)
22nd May 2010 10:36pm
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27th May 2010 3:30am
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18th Jun 2010 00:16am
dang almost every emotional poem u write i can relate 2. good work.=)
18th Jun 2010 4:21pm
thank you! i like to try to come up with stuff thats deep. its very rewarding when others can relate. it makes it that much better
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