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wish
ive been dragged down
and left out
by friends and fears
for a thousand days for a thousand years
got a hate game career
its an angry world
and you're a stupid lil girl
you an oyster when u could be a pearl
if you could look me in the eye
and tell me how many times a day i die
i would make you mine
but u cant
so i rave and rant
step on you like an ant
fuck you like a fan and never talk to you again
and left out
by friends and fears
for a thousand days for a thousand years
got a hate game career
its an angry world
and you're a stupid lil girl
you an oyster when u could be a pearl
if you could look me in the eye
and tell me how many times a day i die
i would make you mine
but u cant
so i rave and rant
step on you like an ant
fuck you like a fan and never talk to you again
Published 10th Oct 2012
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10th Oct 2012 12:21pm
Fantastic write
i really like the line "you're a stupid lil girl
you an oyster when u could be a pearl"
Great Stuff
Cheers
Marcus
i really like the line "you're a stupid lil girl
you an oyster when u could be a pearl"
Great Stuff
Cheers
Marcus
3rd Dec 2012 00:19am
13th Feb 2013 4:26am
Nice nice.. But can you just put on the last line I'd fuck you
Like a fan
If I'm going to read it it will sound better if I pause after the fuck you!! Just my opinion I like this piece
Like a fan
If I'm going to read it it will sound better if I pause after the fuck you!! Just my opinion I like this piece
30th Jul 2013 3:05am
you an oyster when u could be a pearl
if you could look me in the eye
and tell me how many times a day i die
i would make you mine
People always want you to make them what they need to make themselves into. I tried hard not to stomp on lives when I was younger.
if you could look me in the eye
and tell me how many times a day i die
i would make you mine
People always want you to make them what they need to make themselves into. I tried hard not to stomp on lives when I was younger.
