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18-30 HOLIDAY BEACH
Lasses in bikinis, lads in Speedos,
Subtly stirring each other’s libidos,
Letting the imagination roam
To do what they wouldn’t do at home.
Lasses sometimes shed bikini tops
Where they won’t get picked up by the cops.
Lack of preparatory information
Fosters behaviour to disgrace their home nation.
Both sexes get drunk, even fight,
Fornicate or skinny-dip at night.
Others end up next morn in police station,
Caught in al fresco fornication.
Most sensible ones just want to dance
And stay indoors for holiday romance.
Published 10th Oct 2012
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10th Dec 2012 9:54pm
It might have been a tad strange that I found a healthy amount of humor in this one, nicely written
It is as much an observational poem - not easy to find humour unless of punning kind eg about bikini tops and not being picked up by cops. I have not been to such resorts but it is based on newspaper reports, accounts by those who have been on them, and it does reflect that there are young people who enjoy these holidays without the excesses and the trouble with the local law. Agree nicely written, swear words kept out.
