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Doppelganger
she was so pretty in her
cozy dark brown coffin
as she requested..
so full of serenity that
it made me jealous
i wanted to be with her..
i wanted to be like her..
in her cold arms i wanted to be held
in that very moment i would swear
i'd be her ghostly double
her very own doppelganger..
† to my dearest 22/2/2010
cozy dark brown coffin
as she requested..
so full of serenity that
it made me jealous
i wanted to be with her..
i wanted to be like her..
in her cold arms i wanted to be held
in that very moment i would swear
i'd be her ghostly double
her very own doppelganger..
† to my dearest 22/2/2010
Published 17th May 2010
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25th May 2010 10:31pm
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25th May 2010 10:34pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:55pm
26th May 2010 4:09pm
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27th May 2010 10:12pm
21st Nov 2010 2:50pm
this poem got it's hook in me deep...
"she was so pretty in her
cozy dark brown coffin
as she requested..
so full of serenity that
it made me jealous"
the jealousy is a strong turn. loved it. now i'm going to have to look up the word "doppelganger". that's the mark of a good poem. it makes me want to look up the words i don't know. thanks for sharing...
"she was so pretty in her
cozy dark brown coffin
as she requested..
so full of serenity that
it made me jealous"
the jealousy is a strong turn. loved it. now i'm going to have to look up the word "doppelganger". that's the mark of a good poem. it makes me want to look up the words i don't know. thanks for sharing...
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
7th Jun 2012 7:31pm
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