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a CradLed Fix
He
starts to bark
like
a starving dog
head back
feet cracked
he's
finally came..
grunts like
daddy
as he's
raping
his own newborn
rubbing his dick
on a
cradled fix
the baby is broken.
and in my mind
i'm screaming
"Get Off Me!"
but
instead I moan
so he can
take it home
I
wanna cry
but i'm
high on
filth and discrimination
in the midst
of
a creation
breeding these
filthy seeds..
for my
dirty deeds
are
far from cheap
this pussy is priceless...
yeah..
If only..
starts to bark
like
a starving dog
head back
feet cracked
he's
finally came..
grunts like
daddy
as he's
raping
his own newborn
rubbing his dick
on a
cradled fix
the baby is broken.
and in my mind
i'm screaming
"Get Off Me!"
but
instead I moan
so he can
take it home
I
wanna cry
but i'm
high on
filth and discrimination
in the midst
of
a creation
breeding these
filthy seeds..
for my
dirty deeds
are
far from cheap
this pussy is priceless...
yeah..
If only..
Published 7th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2012 11:44pm
This is a very "In your face" read, as most of your poems tend to be. Your my guilty pleasure of the poetry world.
There is pain in this piece, harsh with a sarcastic bite. Good work,
AlwaysCaliban
There is pain in this piece, harsh with a sarcastic bite. Good work,
AlwaysCaliban
7th Oct 2012 11:56pm
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3rd Dec 2012 4:18am
This is cold, hard, and suffocating
and that is what makes it a good write in my opinion. In response to my niece's goings on about mine, and their mother's childhood I responded.
" That kinda crap doesn't make broken little angels girls. It makes you hard, even mean. "
Particularly in internet writing, I think that point too often gets missed. I'm no one's angel, and it is refreshing as hell to read someone of a like mind. :)
and that is what makes it a good write in my opinion. In response to my niece's goings on about mine, and their mother's childhood I responded.
" That kinda crap doesn't make broken little angels girls. It makes you hard, even mean. "
Particularly in internet writing, I think that point too often gets missed. I'm no one's angel, and it is refreshing as hell to read someone of a like mind. :)
3rd Dec 2012 6:08am
Do you know that I actually silently hoped that you would read me. and I would NEVER admit something like that to anyone. I appreciate the fuck out of it.
3rd Dec 2012 12:12pm
Keep'em coming ;)
I will read more :)
and thank you ... for telling it more like it actually is.
I will read more :)
and thank you ... for telling it more like it actually is.