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Peices of A Madman
I lost my marbles bad
If I can just smoke another Marlboro pack
They say I'm weird, I say I think to much
And I just threw up, I want to get out of this state of mind
Hateful times, I'm grateful I can just rhyme
I know you disagree and want to be enemies
And not friends, but often I
Look towards the sky, ask god the questions of a million whys
Never got a reply
Life moves on? Somehow I never forget
If I can just smoke another Marlboro pack
They say I'm weird, I say I think to much
And I just threw up, I want to get out of this state of mind
Hateful times, I'm grateful I can just rhyme
I know you disagree and want to be enemies
And not friends, but often I
Look towards the sky, ask god the questions of a million whys
Never got a reply
Life moves on? Somehow I never forget
Published 7th Oct 2012
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7th Oct 2012 11:17pm
17th Oct 2012 11:00am
Word up, catch the hidden message in that one, comrade. "Keep Watching the Skies" from War of the Worlds, the last line of the radio drama that proved to a panicked Amerika the power of the human voice. Most important 4 words in all of science fiction. You keep your madman pieces and don't let anyone else assemble them for you!
8th Oct 2012 1:03am
11th Oct 2012 11:57pm
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17th Oct 2012 11:03am
They say I'm weird, I say I think to much
And I just threw up, I want to get out of this state of mind
Hateful times, I'm grateful I can just rhyme
I feel that one everyday, man. I call it "Honesty in mental vomit-spree", but it's the same thing. People tell me all the time I think too much, until I shut them down. But I shouldn't ever have to do that. Fuck anyone who tells you that you think too much. I've read so much of your work and I say, keep questioning yourself. Fuck anyone who tells you self-testing is the enemy to self-confidence. They're lying. Self-doubt is the enemy of confidence. Introspection is Lucifer's gift and the jewel of the pomnegranate Eve ate of. 5 Directions. 5 senses. Keep your pieces, they help you kjnow yourself, which makes you more powerful. Each one is a dangerous weapon.
Life moves on? Somehow I never forget
Wild West.
And I just threw up, I want to get out of this state of mind
Hateful times, I'm grateful I can just rhyme
I feel that one everyday, man. I call it "Honesty in mental vomit-spree", but it's the same thing. People tell me all the time I think too much, until I shut them down. But I shouldn't ever have to do that. Fuck anyone who tells you that you think too much. I've read so much of your work and I say, keep questioning yourself. Fuck anyone who tells you self-testing is the enemy to self-confidence. They're lying. Self-doubt is the enemy of confidence. Introspection is Lucifer's gift and the jewel of the pomnegranate Eve ate of. 5 Directions. 5 senses. Keep your pieces, they help you kjnow yourself, which makes you more powerful. Each one is a dangerous weapon.
Life moves on? Somehow I never forget
Wild West.