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When It's Real
When Its Real
He wont tell me he Love's me with words,
instead...
he will let his eyes roam the expanse of
my ample frame letting his eyes rest on my
supple hills and valleys...then his smile
will let me know that my temple...is his home
When It's Real
It won't matter that
I'm "used goods".. he will
look at me and shine me up
with his caring hands and tender ways
He will remind me of my worth...
because I ...will be so precious to him.
When It's Real
A day spent at home in the crevice of his arm
watching a movie will be what makes our hearts
content...we will move easy with each other...
Nothing forced....and there will be no need to hurry
When It's Real
My tears will matter to him...deeply
my fears will become a priority to him,and
he will make haste to lay waste to my demons...
When It's Real
I won't have to search for the truth
He...will be my truth,and everything about
him will resonate with the vibration I need
to breathe....
When It's Real
he wont just seek my flesh in moments of lust
he will adore my softness and loose himself
within my folds ...because he has found
what he has needed...finally
When It's Real...
I will Finally be able to lay
my weary ink pen down.
No longer writing about when it's real
I Will Live It....
Jah...when will what I write...
become...what is real?
He wont tell me he Love's me with words,
instead...
he will let his eyes roam the expanse of
my ample frame letting his eyes rest on my
supple hills and valleys...then his smile
will let me know that my temple...is his home
When It's Real
It won't matter that
I'm "used goods".. he will
look at me and shine me up
with his caring hands and tender ways
He will remind me of my worth...
because I ...will be so precious to him.
When It's Real
A day spent at home in the crevice of his arm
watching a movie will be what makes our hearts
content...we will move easy with each other...
Nothing forced....and there will be no need to hurry
When It's Real
My tears will matter to him...deeply
my fears will become a priority to him,and
he will make haste to lay waste to my demons...
When It's Real
I won't have to search for the truth
He...will be my truth,and everything about
him will resonate with the vibration I need
to breathe....
When It's Real
he wont just seek my flesh in moments of lust
he will adore my softness and loose himself
within my folds ...because he has found
what he has needed...finally
When It's Real...
I will Finally be able to lay
my weary ink pen down.
No longer writing about when it's real
I Will Live It....
Jah...when will what I write...
become...what is real?
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Re: When It's Real
6th Oct 2012 00:41am
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6th Oct 2012 1:17am
Re: When It's Real
6th Oct 2012 00:47am
"A day spent at home in the crevice of his arm"
Great write sweetheart... Thank you
Great write sweetheart... Thank you
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re: Re: When It's Real
6th Oct 2012 1:18am
Thank You Dr.Love....
I am honored that you graced my pages today!
Thanks for reading!
Fire
I am honored that you graced my pages today!
Thanks for reading!
Fire
Re: When It's Real
6th Oct 2012 1:07am
re: Re: When It's Real
6th Oct 2012 1:19am
Indeed my friend...Indeed it is, I must say
I cant wait till I get my turn (smile)
Fire
I cant wait till I get my turn (smile)
Fire
Re: When It's Real
6th Oct 2012 2:06am
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6th Oct 2012 2:11am
Re: When It's Real
6th Oct 2012 5:00pm
ok... this was powerful and heartfelt. My stanza of choice is,
When It's Real...
I will Finally be able to lay
my weary ink pen down.
No longer writing about when it's real
nice...
When It's Real...
I will Finally be able to lay
my weary ink pen down.
No longer writing about when it's real
nice...
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re: Re: When It's Real
8th Oct 2012 8:39pm
Thank You RP,
My soul and heart were the culprit for this write..
Lately I have had a need to explore my own depths to keep a clean and clear view of what I what....and what Jah says I need...
Fire
My soul and heart were the culprit for this write..
Lately I have had a need to explore my own depths to keep a clean and clear view of what I what....and what Jah says I need...
Fire
Re: When It's Real
7th Oct 2012 6:04am
You wrote a poem that men and women together would want. This is awesome. That sensuality, thay passion, that love, that vulnerability that we all fall victim to. But i too want that real shit and hope its every bit luke this description.
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re: Re: When It's Real
8th Oct 2012 8:41pm
Thank You P.S.
This is the kinda Love that crosses all ,and everything...leaving no part of the soul untouched..
That is the kind of Love that men and woman really need...but are too afraid to grasp.
Thank you for reading
Fire
This is the kinda Love that crosses all ,and everything...leaving no part of the soul untouched..
That is the kind of Love that men and woman really need...but are too afraid to grasp.
Thank you for reading
Fire
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8th Oct 2012 10:32pm
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8th Oct 2012 10:42pm
Re: When It's Real
8th Oct 2012 11:27pm
You are so right about what it's like when it's real and how beautifully you expressed that here. You have great insight into love! Excellent poem.
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9th Oct 2012 00:19am
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re: Re: When It's Real
9th Oct 2012 9:15pm
Thank you Kitty!
and as always I am so honored that you graced my pages!
Fire
and as always I am so honored that you graced my pages!
Fire
Re: When It's Real
9th Oct 2012 4:10am
This sounds like an early Tracy Chapman song... I can hear horns in the background when I spit it out loud. I love this piece.
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Loki,
I take that ass a kick as compliment comming from you with your prolific self!
Fire
I take that ass a kick as compliment comming from you with your prolific self!
Fire