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That good shit
We never saw eye to eye
but when we fucked
we fucked
It was that fireworks type shit you see in the movies
no sweet words
never ripped each others clothes off
still it was so good
I'd wrap my legs around you everyday before you had to leave for work just to get you to fuck me first
that trick with my tongue on your ear
always made you the opposite of early
remembering how I use to love to make you messy before you showered
then watch the water glisten off your body
wanting you again
touching myself watching you closely
locking eyes through the steamy glass door
reaching for me you guide me to you
i'd bend on all fours
for that deep perfect fit
damn baby those memories are that good shit
but when we fucked
we fucked
It was that fireworks type shit you see in the movies
no sweet words
never ripped each others clothes off
still it was so good
I'd wrap my legs around you everyday before you had to leave for work just to get you to fuck me first
that trick with my tongue on your ear
always made you the opposite of early
remembering how I use to love to make you messy before you showered
then watch the water glisten off your body
wanting you again
touching myself watching you closely
locking eyes through the steamy glass door
reaching for me you guide me to you
i'd bend on all fours
for that deep perfect fit
damn baby those memories are that good shit
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Re: That good shit
5th Oct 2012 3:16pm
I can smell that way over here....I am now officially ready to go back to bed.....
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5th Oct 2012 3:17pm
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5th Oct 2012 6:33pm
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5th Oct 2012 6:29pm
Whew....Gg!!!! That's that damned Portuguese passion blazing up inside you girl. To hear you describe those feelings, man that done messed a brother's head all up!!!!
To find a sista' like you.......man it would lower the divorce rate in America at least 50% LOL
Great write babygirl. : )
To find a sista' like you.......man it would lower the divorce rate in America at least 50% LOL
Great write babygirl. : )
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5th Oct 2012 6:34pm
Lol yeah I think there will be many more erotics coming out of me lol. Xoxo you kill me music much love thanks
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12th Oct 2012 00:51am
I support this public announcement. That defi-nate-doggly messed up a brothers head!
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12th Oct 2012 1:32am
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5th Oct 2012 6:53pm
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HA! I thought this was going to be about something you were smoking... lamo!!! Well, in a way it was, but in a better, healthier sort of way! SMOKIN' HOT!!!
Love the visuals... jj
Love the visuals... jj
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5th Oct 2012 10:21pm
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7th Oct 2012 5:01am
Hahaha, I think that would get me over the fear of eating jello in an instant! HA! jj
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7th Oct 2012 7:39am
lol, glad you remember my fav flav... sugar free orange jello with sugar free Cool Whip on top... YUMMMMM!!!
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5th Oct 2012 10:59pm
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17th Oct 2012 8:53pm
Loved it! It Painted a picture in my mind,those memories are good! :) Thanks!!
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