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Star of Light
Brave are the eyes
that see into a mirror
unshielded from truth's
blunt and pointed finger
This is you
real and refined
No veil of blame
No weight of judgment
No mist of denial
This is you
heroic
for you have faced demons
called them your own
slain them with
compassion and forgiveness
Courageous are the hands
that reach out to another in need
unarmed of pride
that cripples many
with silence or an empty roar
This is you
strength personified
No muffled voice
No walls in sight
No muted heart
This is you
valiant
for you have progressed
leaps in the smallest of steps
you have survived
to call another day
A Living Day
that see into a mirror
unshielded from truth's
blunt and pointed finger
This is you
real and refined
No veil of blame
No weight of judgment
No mist of denial
This is you
heroic
for you have faced demons
called them your own
slain them with
compassion and forgiveness
Courageous are the hands
that reach out to another in need
unarmed of pride
that cripples many
with silence or an empty roar
This is you
strength personified
No muffled voice
No walls in sight
No muted heart
This is you
valiant
for you have progressed
leaps in the smallest of steps
you have survived
to call another day
A Living Day
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Re: Star of Light
2nd Oct 2012 6:02pm
Courageous are the hands
that reach out to another in need
unarmed of pride
that cripples many
with silence or an empty roar
Powerful words Soul Man!!! Great read Sir Enjoyed it, thank you...
that reach out to another in need
unarmed of pride
that cripples many
with silence or an empty roar
Powerful words Soul Man!!! Great read Sir Enjoyed it, thank you...
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2nd Oct 2012 7:15pm
You live up to your name Soul Man, as this is written from your soul. Very powerful indeed...
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2nd Oct 2012 7:50pm
I love this piece! This one goes on the wall to inspire when the need arises.
Red
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3rd Oct 2012 2:45am
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We must be true to ourselves no matter what arises. There are not enough genuine people in this world, and you are one of them. Thank you for that, among many other things.
Beautifully written. Your work always speaks to me.
Beautifully written. Your work always speaks to me.
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3rd Oct 2012 3:49pm
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6th Oct 2012 8:37pm
I agree, this is excellent...I can't pick a favorite line because I love them all...one of your finest poems, Ken!
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11th Nov 2012 3:46pm
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much appreciation :) So easy to vent toward others in daily life and fail to see through eyes of compassion at times. Thanks!
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4th Nov 2012 10:24pm
A great poem of encouragement to see ourselves as we are and what we can be.
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11th Nov 2012 3:48pm
yes, it is the positive possibilities WE choose that illuminate life. Thanks
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