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In my heart you had a safe place
If you had been true
in my heart you would have found
the safest place for you.
Oblivious of your presence
you came, lavished me with your grace
sharing your essence.
Now where have you gone,
why have our dreams been set a drift
our moorings undone?
My heart is leery, I believe in none,
battle weary, every ray of hope,
just another reflection of the sun.
Is there no one
who is honest enough to speak
without a forked tongue?
Without true honesty
you are just another lothario
playing games callously.
Gypsy Red
Published 2nd Oct 2012
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2nd Oct 2012 3:03pm
2nd Oct 2012 3:12pm
Yes they can, and for that I say "leave me the hell alone" If you come baring false hope and lies, go away.
Thanks for the comment Doc.
Red
Thanks for the comment Doc.
Red
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
2nd Oct 2012 3:14pm
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You and I share something in common my friend, a hurt that does not want to heal, all be it at opposite ends of the spectrum.
Thanks for the comment.
Red
Thanks for the comment.
Red
2nd Oct 2012 4:06pm
Brillant write as always red.
I love reading poetry i can relate to.
keep up the amazing work
zenith
I love reading poetry i can relate to.
keep up the amazing work
zenith
2nd Oct 2012 4:16pm
Thank you Z; I am happy that you can relate and enjoyed the piece, for me it's what make writing worth while.
Red
Red
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
2nd Oct 2012 4:49pm
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2nd Oct 2012 4:51pm
2nd Oct 2012 5:59pm
What is it about this life that often thwarts two from being together. Sometimes that is a good thing as it takes time and a LOT of honest sharing to truly know another soul. Another stirring piece!
Your comment Ken is absolutely true but it must always begin with honesty so it can get off on the right foot. When you begin with a good foundation the rest of the trials you may encounter might be more manageable. Thanks for reading
Big hugs
Red
Big hugs
Red
3rd Oct 2012 4:38am
The heart is a safe place, but sometimes those that shelter within hurts it. Gypsy red, as usual...
3rd Oct 2012 3:03pm
14th Oct 2012 4:28am
14th Oct 2012 2:35pm
Good to see you brother Red, thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
Red
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