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RED SILKS SHEETS AND LINGERIE - EPILOGUE
Thus, equal ranked in nudity,
Our "one flesh" act could come to be.
Morning woke us embraced in bed,
Our bodies swathed in silken red.
We exchanged thanks and "You were great
On this anniversary date."
O Wife, for this you are first-prized:
That RED hot break you organized!
Our "one flesh" act could come to be.
Morning woke us embraced in bed,
Our bodies swathed in silken red.
We exchanged thanks and "You were great
On this anniversary date."
O Wife, for this you are first-prized:
That RED hot break you organized!
Published 2nd Oct 2012
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2nd Oct 2012 6:55am
I am indebted to Lily Mae about that picture, which appears in her poem "Will you let me?"
2nd Oct 2012 8:37pm
2nd Oct 2012 10:12pm
Thank you for your message. I dont seem to be able to reply. Hope you read my poem 'Our time - spanking'
I wrote it from a Dom perspective..for my Dom actually.
Best wishes
Gem
I wrote it from a Dom perspective..for my Dom actually.
Best wishes
Gem
3rd Oct 2012 7:00am
3rd Oct 2012 10:15pm
Thinking about the poem as a whole, I thought up a blurb (ok, the vision seems a little ambitious):
Move over, "Fifty Shades of Grey"!
A Red hot rival comes your way,
To help bring new life to the hay
And married couples faithful stay!
Move over, "Fifty Shades of Grey"!
A Red hot rival comes your way,
To help bring new life to the hay
And married couples faithful stay!